two dogs a girl and groominggrooming and training your dog

Does this sound good? Any suggestions on improvement?

I am doing a project for school which is writing a business plan like you would for a real company. My business is a tack store. Here are the brands I am planning on carrying:
albacon
anky
ariat
bates
centaur
cavallo
cadence
crosby
collegiate
davis
equifit
easyboot
eskadron
FITS
happy mouth
herm sprenger
horsewear ireland
henri de rivel
intec
kerrits
korsteel
kincade
medallion
mattes
metalab
MDC
mountain horse
marcel toulouse
nunn finer
on course
oster
professionals choice
poly pads
pikeur
passier
pessoa
royal rider
romf
riders international
roma
stubben
shires
tuff rider
tipperary
thornhill
vespucci
vega
weatherbeeta
woof
wintec
and stuff from tackwholesale.com.

the list sounds good! make sure you include fly mask carriers and kids brands of riding stuff!

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